2/8/10 - Sentences
Admired Author:
"My mouth dropped open as I watched the beautiful, sleek animal enjoying the last few crumbs of his treat."
- Teri Brown
My Sentence:
Gianna and Benjamin leaned down to pick up the fallen papers at the same moment, their fingers brushing against each other lightly and with a small smile their lifelong friendship began.
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Thanks for posting early. (Post early and often!) I'd divide your sentence into two -- or just leave out the "and with a small smile" part....
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