Day Thirteen Poetry:
Faded Memories
darkness wraps around me
as comfortably as your faded sweatshirt
that I still cling on to
hug to my slight frame
though it no longer smells like you
a stolen token
reminding me
even when I wish only to forget
in the darkness
alone
Tuesday, April 13, 2010
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I love this! I can definitely relate to missing someone, the opening two lines of the poem are very powerful. I like how the sweatshirt symbolizes the person that you want to miss and at the same time the person you want to forget. I also like how you talk about the darkness.
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