Day Six Poetry:
The Masterpiece
colors flash across
the newly turned page
red, orange, yellow
aided by an ink-stained hand
like a hawk descending on its prey
purple, blue, green
in search of its muse
to complete the frame
Tuesday, April 6, 2010
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
The use of colors in this is great. It even like how you use the purple, blue, green after the hawk line because those colors always make me think of nature.
ReplyDeleteI agree with erin those are pretty cool colors, and they also do make me think of nature. good visual and smilie with the hawk. Hawks are badass
ReplyDeleteI shall be the third to say I really like this poem! It's a lot of cool images put together. nice work
ReplyDeleteA hawk needs a muse! Of course. Why did I never know that?
ReplyDelete